James Ernst
09/07/2011
Mr.Smith/Mrs.Russo
English 4
College Application Essay
Hello my name is James Ernst. I am currently 17 years of age and working 3 jobs. There are many reasons i have realized your college is the right college for me. I would also like to share some reasons why i feel i would be a good addition to your school.
I am vary motivated, and currently work three jobs. These three jobs consist of Wawa, Bottom Dollar Foods, and Lake Pine Colony Club. In these areas i am cashier, maintenance, floor and sales associate. All of my life i have been helping in my neighborhood doing everything from clean up to senior citizen help. In my past few years i was on my freshmen swim team, took a college class after school to help prepare for after high school and all around just tryed to be involved.
I am currently in a technical school for engineering. Its actually called Camden County Technical School and it has a variety of different cultures and or races. This type of experience is great when looking to go in college because it shows you can get along with all types of people for African to American to white to even Mexican. I can and will get along with all who come in contact with me at your school regardless of what race or culture they are.
I have done great research about this college and know it will be good for me. I have looked at scholar ships that could be granted to me as well as grants and loans i may have to take out. In all this research i have found that your school has the courses i would like to take and is in my budget which means your school is the right school for me.
These are a few different things about my life and goals. I would love to hear to be accepted into your college and cant wait to hear back from you. I am a good student, i am vary motivated, and need to complete my goal in life and your school would help me get one step closer.
Sincerely, James Ernst
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