Dear, Universal of Collage
My girlfriend is the most significant influence on me. She has change the world i think and know about life. She influence me by pushing me to my limits and beyond what i would like to do in school. i am more focus on my school work and getting the grades that i know i can active. My attitude has also improved greatly. The reason that she has such an impact on me is because I’m was an avenger student with avenger grades. But my girlfriend is an honor student. Her grades are all A’s, she always on time for school, helps other out even if she does not want to but she will take out the time to help. She has made that kind of an impact on my life. Really she make my life look sad. But even so I made the necessary change in my life to look her in the eyes and tell her I’m doing my best.
An other person in my life that has influence my life would have to be my mother. She may be mean and all but she means well. She always look forward to me taking the next steps in life as an child going into adult. She always telling me that she is proud of me for giving my best. My mom does give me influence in my life.
These are the people that gives me the most influence in my life. And with out these people, I would love to say that I could go through collage with easy. But in reality it would be ten times harder. So I am very happy that these people are in my life.
i like how you put the people that influence in you life in your essay.
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