Friday, March 30, 2012

Macbeth vs Polanski

Shakespeare version of Macbeth and Polanski movie of Macbeth. The films ending is kind of different from that of the play. I think that the director of the play wanted to have the guests thinking. Even though Malcolm is crowned as Scotland's rightful king his come to an end speech is discarded in favour of an abrupt wordless scene showing his brother Donalbain returning from the exile. Throughout the entire story, Donalbain is shown as being jealous of Malcolm, as it maybe even more so than Macbeth was the jealous one. The ending as a result recasts the story as a closed boundary of action suggesting that the tragedy will be repeated again.

When is it ok to murder?

When is it okay to murder or when is it not okay? it is only okay to murder if they is out of control with power when they gain it or living in the name of the devil as in doing his work for him god has his people and the devil have his so believe it or not their are times it's okay to murder. when they put there self before their loving people and family then they deserve to be murder if you have explosion negative thoughts all the time to create destruction to people or to the world you deserve to be murder. But most of the time no one deserve to be murder everyone was put on this earth for a reason some might not realize that but there are and people dont believe it so they just live by the hi power rules and get tortured,abuse, or murder. it's not okay to murder when your innocent defenseless and been good all your life.

Tuesday, March 27, 2012

sopa

Sopa is kinda like 1984. They have some things in common. In 1984 they dont have much freedom and they contol what u watch and look up. If the law is passed we wont have the freedon to do what ever we want on the internet. This will make every one in the u.s. to feel like we are being controlled and watched. I feel like i should be able to look or search up what ever i want to with out any problems. This concerns me alot. If this law is passed who knows what else the government will try to get passed. Whats next a scenor on the tv? They are going to try to pass other stupid laws. Its all about money and thats y they pass stupid laws. Its all about the money.

Monday, March 26, 2012

Movie Ending vs. Book Ending- Macbeth

I think that the reason the movie of Macbeth was different from the book was that the director wanted to leave the audience with questions; like is Fleance going to follow in Macbeth’s footsteps? Will the same thing that happen to Macbeth happen to Fleance? Did Banquo tel Fleance about the witches? And will Fleance become king like the three witches told Macbeth and Banquo? Directors are always trying to make great movies and bring in big audiences to their movies; and I think this was the directors way of doing so. I think maybe he was looking at a possebility of doing a part 2. Maybe he was trying to leave the audience with that suspence.
From what I saw I think if there was to be a part two, Fleance would of probably done the same as Macbeth. Maybe this was the directors way of showing us that Fleance also had a dark side. Or that most people would react just or similar to how Macbeth acted if we were in his shoes, even though we are so quick to judge him. Which I think is a great way of shows this because as I, and probably others, were reading Macbeth we though of Fleance as a good guy; someone who wouldn’t do what Macbeth did, and this ending shows that even a good person can do bad things for power or become blind and mad with power. I would of liked to see a part 2 to Macbeth to see even what I think is true…

Friday, March 23, 2012

Macbeth

I wasnt here for this scene when he came in to the witches coven but i am going to take a best guess at what has happened in that scene. Maybe he was seeking that there is a way for him to become king just like Macbeth did or it could be that he could have visualized his father telling him that there are witches and that he could get his future read and become king in the future just like Macbeth did. Maybe he was also trying to seek revenge for his fathers death because he was angry of what happened. Or it could be that after everyone killed Macbeth and had to do what they had to do he probably killed everyone and went to te witches coven and tried to ask him what is in the future for him now that he killed these people because he could go somewhere else and no one would know that he has killed all of those people.

Fleance Heads to the Witches

At the end of Polanski's version of Macbeth Fleance goes to the witches' coven. By making Fleance go there Polanski makes the audience think about the things that might be running through Fleance's mind. I think that Fleance went to the witches' coven because his father might have told him about the prophecy the witches made during the first act: "Hail" "Hail" "Hail" "Lesser than Macbeth, and greater..." "No so happy, yet much happier..." "You shall father kings, yetnot be one yourself. So all hail, Macbeth and Banquo!"

If in fact Banquo had told his son of this prophecy then there is a chance that Fleance went there to find out information pertaining to the prophecy. He might have also gone there to avenge his father's death, because if the witches hadn't said anything then his father might still be alive, for it was the witches who planted the seeds of murder in great Macbeth's head.

In doing this, Polanski has changed what Shakespeare had originally meant to be the final scene of this extravagent play. Shakespeare had oringinally ended the play with a speech from Malcolm signifying that all is well, and as it should be within the fair country of Scotland. Polanski changed this to Fleance's arrival at the citches' coven. While this is an excellent way to end the movie we must acknowledge the fact that the original ending is better suited for the play. Polanski made it so that there is a small flicker of hope for a sequel to the movie when there is no way that there can be one. It also gives us some resolution and sparks our curiosity because it lets us know that Fleance definitely makes it out alive but it also makes us wonder whether the prophecy will come true.

Macbeth ending Book vs Movie

In the movie representation of Macbeth, the ending showed an extra scene where Fleance retrned to the witches coven. I think that there are two reasons for this, one to do with the story, and one just for movie purposes. I think that this scene is there to reiterate just how bad human will become just for the sake of power. I'm sure that everyone in the story now knows that it was the witches that sent Macbeth on his muderas rampage, but Fleance probablily wanted to see if they could predict his future, to see if he would abtain power. He probablily thinks if he thinks his plans out he won't turn out like Macbeth. And as far as the second reason why we got a cliffhanger ending inthe movie, is incase hollywood want to create a Shakespear like sequel to his book.  

Fleance

Fleance may return to the witches seeking answers. He might want to know what his future holds. He might wanna know if he will be king one day. He might want to know if he will have to murder any one else. He might be concerned about his family and what will happen to them. He might seek them for answers about his father. Maybe he believed that his dad wasn't suppose to die. Maybe all he thought about was how he could get revenge. Deep down inside maybe he thought he would receive some benefits for all the suffer he had to go through in his childhood. The witches might have future plans for him or maybe they don't have any for him. This leaves everyone wondering what do the witches have planned for fleance. Macbeth is already died but maybe he goes and gets revenge on the other people of who helped kill his father.

Polanski's Film

Well According to Polanski's film I really think that when Fleance returned to the witches coven the implication of the action was to make sure he was not the next victim. He went to the witches to make sure he had someone powerful and evil to be on his side. I think that Fleance does not want to end up like Mac Beth A king who gets killed by someone who isn't even as important as he was. I think that Fleance is going to try to be the next king so to do that he will have to kill the person who killed Mac Beth because thats the only way he would be able to accomplish what he wants. Fleance wants to replace the former king so to do that he is going to get the witches to help him out a little with getting the job done so it wont be the other way around. The film is different from Shakespeare version only because the film actually shows how Fleance first returns to the witches coven prepared to get them on his side and ready to kill the king just like Mac Beth was killed so he will be the king with all the power and everyone looking up to him.
in Polanski's film Fleance returns to the witch's' coven, this is a very unforeseen twist to the classic writing of Shakespeare's "Macbeth". At first i thought this was just another Hollywood cliffhanger put there just for the possibility of a part to two. But the more i look at it i see that this ending leaves a lot more room for thought. It leaves you guessing. Wondering things like why did fleance go to see the witches, how did he even know about the witches, will the witches turn fleance on his own country like they did Macbeth, or even make you questing where was fleance throw out the hole play. this ending, even though it was not part of the original, provides the ending that makes you truly reflect on the hole play form the first scene to the last and for that I believe Polanski's ending was much better then the one originally written by Shakespeare his self

"Im am "


I AM FROM THE “SMALL TOWN” NAMED NORTH CAMDEN.
OUT THERE IT IS A LOT OF DANGER AND YOU HEAR GUNSHOTS…
BUT YOU SHOULD KNOW RIGHT OR WRONG
TOO BAD FOR YOU.
You Just Gotta Watch it Down Here Because

I Do And my Brother protect me and my mother.

I AM FROM’’FAIRY’’JUST LIKE TINKERBELL.
THEY’RE JUST SO BRIGHT WITH THEIR COLORS JUST LIKE ME.
EVERYBODY LIKES WHEN I WEAR PINK& GREEN BECAUSE I’M A FAIRY.
‘’IT IS ALL ABOUT ME’’
‘’Mamita TINK’’

I AM FROM A ROLE MODEL’’MY MOTHER’’
SHE IS AN OUTGOING PERSON ALSO SHE BRINGS HAPPINESS TO THE FAMILY.
THERE’S NO BETTER TIME THEN TIME SPENT WITH HER.
I am very happy that she has all believes on me

and my older brother.

I Would support my family too the end.

I am her only daughter and the best one she ever had in her life.
‘’LOVE YOU MOM’’

friday blog propmt fleance returns

Fleance returns to the witches coven, this changes what Shakespear might have intended by the action took by Fleance at the end of the story. I think Shakespears intensions were to have mcbeth die and end the story with malcom being king and taken over scottland. But i think by fleance going to the witches coven he will try to overthrow malcom as the king and try to beacome the new king of scottland . The intensions of my thought process to what Shakespear intended and what fleance did realy changes the thoughts of viewers in my opinoin i also think that there will be a second part to the movie that will display more emotions of the characters in each scene each character displayed in each scene from Shakespear mcbeth to where students all over the world can learn

Well..

The movie version of the book and the actual book are actually quite similar but are not exactly the same, and there is a very weird change to the end of the book that in my opinion i think drastically changes the way Shakespeare might have wanted or intended the book to end. At the end of the Malcom becomes king and makes a great speech and that is all, and you see in the book , when Fleance is attacked and gets away, he is never heard from again, which brings a conclusion that he basically disapeared, might be dead or alive but no one ever saw him again. In the movie version, Fleance finds himself going to the witches to probably get a prophecy about being king, which his dad Banquo might have told him about. With Fleance being gone and never heard from again, the son of Duncan, Malcom becomes king and all is well with a happily ever after ending. Though now that Fleance has returned to the witches, he might now find out exact details of him being king and i feel as though the movie made it look like history as about to repeat what Macbeth did but with Fleance , in the matter that when he hears the news with his own ears about him supposed to be king , he might let the greed and power get the est of him and maybe he might try to creat a dibolical plan or plot agianst Malcom to see that he becomes king as soon as possible.

human nature

Human nature is apart of every ones life. The actions you do in daily life are acts of a human. The thoughts we have throughout are lives are human nature. The gut feelings we receive in certain situations are human nature. Stereotypes and cliques are human nature. It is human nature for us to sin everyday. It is human nature for us to act aggressive in stressful times. It is human nature for yes to be happy when we receive a gift. It is human nature for a young man to be scared when his girlfriend tells him shes pregnant. It is human nature for people to laugh at jokes. Human nature can be described as acts that we automatically do. Why do we do these things? Why do so many if us react the same? Why is it that human nature is taught by living life and not by teachers? The answer is because it is natural.

Polanski/ shakespeare

The end of the movie was way differnt for the book and in many ways polanski and shakespeare proble had the same veiws. But you must remeber polanski family was burtyly murder and un the movie you can see the growsum and the horries and he said it him self life is just a cycle of living and dead so the way he ended the movie he wanted to make it seem as a cycle as power and killing my prodition is he gose to the witch they say you be king some other stuff and its a cycle again and thats the way polanski saw life. But the way shakespeare saw life is the good and evil, evil will loose and good always wins I mean the was he puts it put as thought it was all macbeth fauilt. The witch told him something and he acked on it and that what i think shakespeare was thinking when he mad the ending he never told us what happens to fleuans what happens after the kingdom reture to noraml also will feluse ever be king and I think polanski awser a lot of those question and let use make ower own ending in ower heads. Also you have to think there are different times shakespeace wrote this book 100 yrs ago so you also need to think about that. Also that were going throught there heads when the wrote/directed the film so those thinks realy come in to play in this movie/book

Free write

I cant wait to get out of school. I think Im ready for the real world and Enjoy my life. I only live once so i have to enjoy my life. I think Im have a great life. Im going to work hard to get what i need. Also have a good wife and kids and nice car. I cant wait to teach my son how to play baseball and be someone in life and become someone in the future. If i have a girl i would teach her softball. I would love to live in a big house and move back to new york and work hard. Maybe own a big store

My Future (Free Write)

John Jay Criminal Justice is a wonderful school for me, I would like to barn more about criminal justice and the related careers. I’m trying to go to john jay so I could move back to my hometown New York City. Also work for NYPD. So while I work hard and get my education, I would like to open a convenience store. I would love to start a family, and if baseball is not my thing, maybe be a baseball coach.


I chose this school because I’m really interested in the courses in criminal justice. John jay has a baseball team, and I am very interested in baseball as well. I think it good for me because New York police department is a great place to start my career. I want to get my bachelor degrees so I could join the U.S Marshal. Then I want to get my way up to the top of the us Marshall. This career inspired me because I have family member in this career and I would love to do something just like them. I remember when I was younger walking down the street and I use to say hello to an officer and I would ask them questions.
In conclusion I want to be successful in this career and in life. I would love to be someone in life. I think my job is to help people and save the city. Being a police is a great thing because I am going to do good things and help other. Also being responsible, honest, careful, and loyal.

Mac Beth

I think in Polanski’s film version Fleance returns to the witches’ coven because in this version there more part added .Shakespeare's darkest exploration into man's base nature is brought to contorted life through Polanski's unique and introspective vision.Polanski had better things. The implication of this action was the ending when Fleance was walking alone. This changes the story a lot because it’s like adding a whole new and exciting ending. This also makes there room to make another book to elaborate more on the occurring.Also in both film MacBeth dies. And Malcom is new King of Scottland. I think that Polanski is better cause is newer.

TALASIA

I believe that polankis’s version of Macbeth was changed at the end to keep people guessing. In his movie in the end fleance goes to the witches coven. It leaves you thinking about the possibilities. The thoughts of what could happen leave you in thought. I personally think that maybe he might be next to be king since he didn’t get killed. Or maybe he would try to defeat macduff and fail, and in the end get himself killed. Its endless possibilities to what polanki was thinking or what he wanted us to think by adding that scene. In shakespears book he just ended by malcom talking about what happed after macduff killed Macbeth. Fleance never even was mentioned again in the book. Im not sure why Polanski felt the need to change that last scene or what was going to his head. I wonder what he wanted us to think or what message he was trying to get through to us.

Human nature

There is a question I would like to answer. This question is "does human nature come from who you are or what you do? This is an interesting question because there is no true answer. The only answers to this question are opinions, and opinions are not facts. My opinion is Human nature comes from a little bit of both who you are and what you do. Just like through out history different races got there own human stereo types. These stereo types came from both whom there where and how they acted in humanity. It still happens to this day. Stereo types from years and years ago are still used by people that are so called racist. Although there are arguments that human nature comes from one or the other I feel they are wrong and am willing to back up my opinion. Please comment and tell me your opinion on the subject.

polanski's film version of macbeth

The ending of Polanski's film is very different from Shakespeare's play. I think that Fleance going to visit the witches implies that Fleance will follow in Macbeth's footsteps. Fleance will try to assassinate King Malcolm the way that Macbeth killed King Duncan. The cycle of violence will not end. Although, Macbeth went to the witches' coven late in the play; even though the witches declared a meeting with Macbeth in the opening scene & they met him in act1 sc,3. In Polanski's film, Fleance visits the witches, but there is no suggestion that the witches decided to meet Fleance or actually met him previous to that. Also I think that Polanski ended the movie like that because he wants the people watching it to question what is going to happen next. I think he did it because he wants everyone to think that Fleance went to the witches to know what is going to happen now that Malcolm is king.

Polanski's film version;

The implication of this action might be that maybe Fleance went to the witches to get information to see what they would tell him. Also maybe he wants to become king, so he going to see what they got to say about Malcoms future, and whats going to happen next. I think he doesnt exactly what to say why Fleance really went over there because he wants to keep the people curious as to what was really going to go down. I also think that if the witches lied to Macbeth they most likely will do the same to Fleance. In my honest opinion I feel as though the witches are up to nothing but bad things. Shakespere wanted to leave the people with wonder, he wanted to leave a good ending. It changes it just a little because he had different endings in the book.

Polanski's Film Version

In William Shake Speare's version of Macbeth the play ends in a speech from Malcolm about mseeing him be crowned king. But, in the Polanski's film version of Macbeth the play ends with Fleance ridinng through the rain going to see the witches. I have a couple of predictions as to why Fleance was riding through the rain to see the witches. One, prediction I have is that maybe Banquo told Fleance before the incounter with the three murderers to see the witches. Another prediction I have is that Fleance was just curious to know what shall become of his future. Maybe, Fleance went to the witches to ask about would he become king one day and if so how. Fleance even proably went to the witches just to see what be came of Macbeth in the after life, after he was killed Mac Duff. Fleance proably wanted to know what be came of Macbeth in the after life because he wanted some thing really really bad to happen to Macbeth after what he did. Maybe Polanski wanted to make it where it was the same situation all over again showing a circular motion of everything. In which case I mean how when Macbeth and Banquo went to see the witches that way the witches could tell both Macbeth and Banquo about their future. Maybe, Banquo told the Fleance after Macbeth was killed, because Banquo proably knew that Macbeth was going to die because of the horrible crime he comitted because he wanted power. So Banquo wanted Fleance to see the witches so the witches could tell him about how he shall become king.

Prompt

In the book it ends by Malcolm giving his speak about him being king. But in the movie it ends by Fleance returns to talk to the witchs. I think that Polanski ended the movie like that because he wants the people watching it to question what is going to happen next. I think he did it becasue he want everyone to think that Fleeance want to the witchs to know what is going to happen now that Malcolm is king. The reason why i think Shakespeare ended the book like that so the reads do/are not questioning what is going on. I think that Polanski ans Shakespeare wanted the book and movie to end two different wants instead of it being the same way because maybe they want to have people question and confused about what was going on. And in present day when you read a book and the watch the movie they are nothing a like. Because in ither the book or in the movie they author or director leave out a lot of different parts from the book. I the movie the director like to change or add a lot of different partd that are not in the book at all. Sometime it make the movie better other times it just make the movie really bad and the book is ten times better. So really it depends on what the author or the director write about.At the end it just depents on what you think is right and what you like better the book or the movie.
This was a sign of maybe a continence in the story of Scotland and Macduff o and also malcom as king. This may be a new way of explaining a new journey for one of the people in Scotland. Maybe even a new crazy Macbeth or mrs.macbeth like character may come upon again….

macbeth

The book ends with malcome giving a speach after Macbeth is killed. The movie ends with Fleance goin to see the witches.I the reason the movie ended with the witches is because the director wanted to leave the audiance wondering. What i think happened is fleance went to see the witches to see what his future was. The witches proboly told him he was going to be king. After the witches told him that he became like Macbeth and started killing people to make what the witches said come true. I think Fleance becomes power thursty and becomes king.He has many sons. They are all crazy and want to be king so the start to fight over the thrown. They killed eachother untill their was one left and his name was John. Once he is king he goes crazy and tries to take over the world. And he is very sucessful with that but the pressure of being king of the worl was terriable. He couldn’t take it so he stepped down from the thrown and gae it to a poor kid he seen on the streets. John became a very successful black smith. He made a lot of money and bought a farm.

Fleance

At the ending of polanskies movie version he adds a part. This part he adds is fleance going to see the witches for the first and only time. There are many reasons I feel he does this. One of these reasons is I feel he wanted to spice up the ending of the book to get you to read more from his selection of books he wrote, But all writers have that goal. Another reason I feel he does this is to make fleance seem interested in what they have to say. He goes there and is expecting to hear all the past and present information the witches know. If he did not do this than the book would be less interesting. This type of action keeps people intact with the book and also make conversation for readers after finishing it. The witches do know/predict what happens at the end of the book and we know that but fleance doesn’t so maybe he is going to ask and find out everything that happened and what will happen later in his life. This changes the story a lot because it’s like adding a whole new and exciting ending. This also makes there room to make another book to elaborate more on the occurring. This makes it so he can make another book explaining fleances life afterwards. Although he doesn’t it makes it so he is capable of doing so.

Another Post

In Polanski's film version, Fleance returns to the witches' coven. What is the implication of this action and how does it change what Shakespeare might have intended? Well how do you know it changes anything? How do you know what Shakespeare intended? Did you sit down with him and talk over tea and say well Shakes what did you intend with the end. I have no clue why Fleance went back to the witches' coven. Maybe he went back to see if the witches could foretell his future like they did Macbeth's. Or maybe he went back to kill the witches because all of the murders could be blamed on the witches for planting the evil seed in Macbeth's head. If not for the witches all of the murders may never have occurred. Also as I said earlier it might not change what Shakespeare intended. Or if Fleance did go back to get his future foretold or to kill the witches it might start a whole new rain of Macbeth except it would be Fleance. And maybe the whole scene didn't have a secret meaning, maybe he was just looking for a place to hide or he was still running and just so happened to go past the withches' coven. I mean do we know for a fact that Fleance even knew that there was a witches' coven or where it is located, on that note maybe it was like one of those movies where a character not knowingly runs by a significant place.

Polanski's Film Version....

Polanski purpose of putting the last part in the movie of fleance going to see the witches. Is to ask why Macbeth did all of those crazy thing to everyone to get power and shakespeare elaborate on Fleance's life after his escape.Although i think it was wrong of macduff to cpme to macbeth castle and kill him andcut his head off It should have been as thrilling on the screen as on the page.Before all of this happened lady macneth threw herself off the castle, and she died..And all of a sudden a man from the castle told macbeth macduff was coming so everyone fleed.That he wanted everyone to know that fleanace.Fleance went to the witches to get information out of them on behakf of macbeth deaf.

Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Free write for 1/27. something that is now 3 months old. Something i should have done three months ago. why it did not get done then i do not know. i have a pretty good feeling that it is because i was not in school that day. But that is not the point the point is that it is a grade and right now i need all the grades i can get even thought it seems pointless to be graded Senior year, hell to be honest i find Senior year it self a waste of time. Because growing up it felt like the only reason i want to school was to learn how to pass State test and seeing how you do not really take any test past your Jr year i do not see the need for Senior year. i mean i do not not see nothing wrong with learn i just feel as though we should go to school learn how to better ourselves and the things we need to do that. What i do not believe is that our hole time in school should be spent learning how to past a test that means absolutely nothing after we get out of school. I mean i completely understand the fact that the test is a way to make sure that we are actually learning but if we are taught soul for the purpose of knowing then would we not know what it takes to past the test? And that is what is on my mind today

Monday, March 19, 2012

I am
I am a brave person. I am a strong minded and being of a person. I am an independent person. I am smart in many ways logically. I am very forgiving. I am a happy but at times negative person. I am a well rounded young man. I am a human being that makes mistakes. I am a normal person as of everyone else. I am someone who has a caring heart. I am an exciting person to hang with. I am a person that well helps when can or needed. I am a person that’s gone and that’s been going through struggled. I am a person tends to take action, because they speak louder then words. I am a person try hard to do what’s right but yet makes conmen mistakes. I am a great friend to attend to when days are not so good. I am a person with a heart the size of a watermelon. I am person who you can tell your secrets to and they wouldn’t be shared. I am a person that completely does have a care of your feelings at times. I am a person that can be mean at times and totally unfair. I am person that is sometimes protective towards my friends and family so I know that they well never be scared. I am a person that is a try hard die hard type guy. I am the type of person that is always looking for fun. I am the type of person that is developing into a great kind of man I am marquis the one they know. I am confident that they know I can be and am at the most great to them I am me!!!!!! And don’t you forget it
Macbeth
So far in the story seems that Macbeth is becoming a whole new person.
In the beginning Macbeth seemed like a fine king; a king that was kinda,smart and caring for his people, he would help his people with all there problems and complaints on the city but in this story as time went on its that the power over deemed Macbeth and overcame him. Macbeth was a changed man when the power began to get to him and his wife’s head because they started seeing things in a way that wasn’t necessarily. And as time went on the power strongly was overcoming Macbeth and his wife it became so strong that they were committing murders, murders on people that they were close to; that they called their friends example is banquo and many others were bought to mind but after awhile the ovious was bought to attention because Macbeth was bought to death by his cruel actions sadly to say his wife is the strong cause of his actions on the murders, because she would install into Macbeths brain to make the kills one way or another, even for petty reasons.
Ending 1984!!!
In the end of 1984, I do believe that Winston dies at the end of 1984 only because fact a question was bought to me about how him and Julia are discovered and capture where their basically tortured to saying whatever it is that they don’t know about them and what they’ve done together. so in a way they are bought to be tortured by the govern which has a secret of their own; which was their supposed to be friend who betrayed them and turned them in. after all that crazy abuse that was given to Julia and Winston the govern has put them in a trance like state where they basically don’t know each other. So is where it seems that they are now a puppet of the big brother and the govern and they can’t think for themselves. So now there living the governs state of mind life which seems plan
SOPA
SOPA IS AN ANTI-PIRACY BILL! In other words it’s kind of like a take over that’s happening to someone. In 1984 this is a rule/bill that was carried through the whole story by big brother. Because big brother and the city of Oceania’s men (government) held there city under high standards and strict rules for everyone in the city. Sopa is just an another stricted rule that was abused in the story by the govern of Oceania. A prime example of it was they people in Oceania not being able to communicate like normal that’s a since of SOPA because their (govern) taking away (stole) the peoples freedom of communication. Or another example is when Winston’s book was takened from him by big brother or when Julia and Winston’s secrets were overheard by the big brother camera. These examples are the example of SOPA and how they run in the book. But in a way SOPA is also use here now in modern times ; examples are well the fact that people are tending to steal things from others by force like cable,homes,pets,children, and much more belongings. These examples of SOPA are being active many anti priacy (SOPAS) are being acted upon these were completely made for the safety and better of others lives and likings. In 1984 this does not really occur because the govern of Oceania is to strong to be overtaken so many people continue to suffer in the story and face a stricted of piracy life.

Friday, March 16, 2012

I am.....

I am a theater kid who loves to sing and dance. I am currently a student at CCTS enrolled in their Performing Arts career field. I am a freak who plays Dungeons and Dragons, and goes out LARPing. I am crazy about performing in any way possible. I am a person who has taken a mime class. I am a mime of sorts longing to speak out and tell people that they have nothing to fear from my kind. I am a future employee of the games department of Six Flags Great Adventure in Jackson, NJ. I am lackadaisical, apathetic, ungrateful, occasionally boring, but extremely smart student.

I am an aspiring broadway or movie star who doesn't know where to start in the world. I am a confused adolescent who sporadically makes a few bad decisions, and gets in quite a bit of trouble for them. I am a child who is forced to go to therapy for different things that my mom is afraid I will do. I am an emotional person who committed acts of self-harm in the past. I am an exceedingly busy person who, despite the fact that he knows he should be doing important things, still finds time to over-think every little thing. I am an amazing liar who is able to convince his friends that nothing is wrong, and tries to tell himself the same thing. I am a victim and predator when it comes to minor bullying. I am a twin who is always asked if both of us are gay. I am a twin who is tired of always being confused with my brother. I am a teenager who is tired of not having many guy friends because they all think I'm gay and want to get in their pants.

I am a member of the Harmony Showchoir which always comes up in my blog posts. I am a recently licensed driver who hardly ever gets the chance to go where he wants to with his car. I am a car owner who needs to pay over a thousand dollars in order to get my car to a condition where it is safe for me to drive it. I am a boy who has always had trouble with relationships due to his parents failed marriage. I am a son who is determined to never end up like his father. I am an eighteen year old male who has lost both of his grandfathers, and whose grandmothers aren't that far away from death. I am a child at heart longing to go play with his Poppop who died of lung cancer when the child was only in kindergarten. I am a 90's kid who can't remember anything that happened to him on 9/11. I am an open-minded individual who supports gay rights so that his brother, aunt, and uncle can all eventually get married to the ones they love. I am a kid who probably wouldn't exist if my mother hadn't had a miscarriage before me. I am the son of Lorena and Thom Melcher. I am what I am, I am my own special creation. I am me and there may be a ton of things I would like to be different in my life, but I wouldn't change who I am for anything or anybody. I am who I am and there is nothing you can say or do to hurt me more than I hurt myself.

My character

I am a very imaginative person. I am someone with almost no attention span at all. I am not very lucky in the social interaction catagory. I am considered to be level headed and a caring person. I am definatly more than meets the eye, I always have something going on inside my head. I am uninterested in listening to the world news in any way, shape, or form. I am very out spoken when it come to events that, in my opoinion, voliate nature. I am nutural when it comes to all of the so called "problems" socieity faces today. I am a firm believer in moral justice.  I am admitably very lazy. I am currently searching of a job. I am probably one of a few people left on this planet who still cares about it as a whole. I am counting the minuets until I finally graduate from this place.
I AM CHARACTER



i am a chracter that you would describes as a man who is 6 ft tall and is very honest and trys very hard to acomplish his goals even if i am late i do my best to make up for miss time even when i im wrong just know i try. try to do my best but not to impress i do it out of confidince which i never had i am. im so glad even when im mad even when im happy when i am sad i feel great many great emotions the feeling of being able to say i am good i am confident i am fearless i am amazing but when i am deprressed my world looks like a gray sky the tempeature drops very low to the point of freezing to death mentaly by all the road blocks i have and have come up aganst but i am in everyway ambitious and a achiever

I AM

I am... I am what, what am I. I am a person who were the heart on there sleve witch mean a lot of different thinking to many people but had all the same meaning let me explan I wear my heart on my sleve I have to emocal I care to much about other then my self I worry about who you are and what you need more then my own self witch in a sence is a good thing but also can hurt you when the person you cared for hurts you just hurts so much more that’s why you look at a lot of men and woman who don’t care who they hurt because at one time they wore there heart on there sleve and they got hurt and just want to show it feel to everone else. I am shy and outgoing you may ask how that possible just because when you first meet me I don’t talk I keep to myself til I feel cofterbel then am a hole new person. Iam more of a “round” person on the outside you think you know me but when you really know me you just spech less like you would never know am gaynes you never thing am gay I mean kind out but if you just met me no so I think am more of a round kind of person. I am a kind of person that will try no matter what anyone say I sometimes think that if I could do what I wanna do I can prove people wrong example they told me ill always e in special needs and look at me now in all regualre classes have all A and Bs so what dose that tell you I love proving people wrong I love showing my hates I can do it that what. I am I know it isnt much but that the story of my life.

All About Who I Am.

I am an intelligent young lady. I am sometimes shy and sometimes very outgoing depending on how close i am to my surroundings. I am quiet when I want to be. I am always ready to spend time with my family and friends. I am always ready to go shopping no matter what time or day. I am always working hard because I know hard work does pay will pay off someday. I am waiting for an acceptance letter from four different colleges Rowan University, Temple University, Deleware State, and William Patterson. I am confident that three out of the four colleges will send me a letter welcoming me to their campus, If not three acceptance letters there will be all four. I am working hard to continue my future goals. I am very close to my brand new start on my future. I am a senior at Camden County Technical Schools. I am graduating June 8 2012. I am going to college and majoring Early Childhood Education. I am determined to make very far in life. I am one day going to open up my very own child care center for children all around my community. I am going to open up this child care center to make sure that children have a safe and fun place to stay while their parents or gaurdians are busy working or getting other things done. I am ready to make all my family members and friends very proud of me. I am positive that all my goals will be accomplished when I complete my four years in college and maybe even more.

I AM!!!!!!!

I am basically a flat person I dont care what people think about me or what they dislike about me I just like me for what I am I dont change for no one nor do I do anything for anyone. I am not the brightest crayon in the box but i do know that 2+2=4. I am the person that would be there for my friends all the time when they need me. I am a person that doesnt need to have a friend just for using them for one thing. I am a person who likes how I look or how much I weigh. I am different from all of you as of everyone is different from everybody. I am the kind of person that dont care what you wear or what you do I would always be there for you. I am the kind of person that holds in their anger when I am picked on. I am also the kindest person you could possibly meet in this world. I am polite, caring, kind, deacent, and also smart. I am not a bully also I am not the type of person to pick a fight with someone but if you pick a fight with me i will fight back for self defense. I am done with this article that we are doing for this class and thank you for listening to my little I am speech. Listen to my next speech next fridayand ill be talking about something intresting again.

I am ready to graduate

I am finally 18, I am a senior at CCTS,I am barely ever on time for class, but when I am n time, Mr.Smith gets pretty hype so lately i have been trying to be here early ! I am not the type of person that hides the truth or lies or tries to getaround things, i usually try to e as straight up as possible but sometimes that causes issues with the people that can not handle the truth and then things get out of and if those people are problematic. I am one hundred percent Puerto Rican. I am constantly talking or trying to come up with new creative ideas to spend my time doing. I am always in the mood for some chocolate chip cookies and ice cream, with mad gummy worms and sprinkles and whipped cream and cherries ! You can even say I am childlike or maybe that i am a bit immature but if you are going to judge me on one aspect you better knw every single aspect or you can be very mistaken on how i come off. I am similar to a a valcano in the meaning that i can erupt and just go off at any time if you push the right button. Ad if your a girl, then i am always down to conversate and make you smile because i was raised to always treat women with the upmost respect ad in response females usually love my personality so it is almost like a gift that i hold, so you can say i am also very smooth when it comes to the other opposite of males ad when it comes to males i am or can be a very chill, calm, relaxing person that is also fun to have around, i am intimadating toward my enemies, affectionate toward their girlfriends and i am impressive towards her parents, I am Jeremy Rivera ;)
I am me. I am myself. I am my own person. I am like no other. I am someone that dose not let others being me down. I am who I chose to be. I am Carlos. I am the a lot of things, but I am nothing. I am a person that has a story like no other. I am the main character of my story. I am the writer of my own story. I am the teller of my story. I am a very smart character. I am dynamic character. I am a character that has very deep, deep pain. I am a character that has faced many troubles and hardships. I am a character that is able to set aside the hardships, in order to move toward easier times. I am a character that looks at the sunny days even when I know there is much more dark days to come. I am someone that dose not truly know who I am, but knows who I want to be. I am one that knows it is not who I am, but who I will be.I am one that knows i have a lot to face. I am the one that decides if I let the troubles change me and how I let hem change me. But for now, I am me and that is who I chose to be.

I am

I am a student at Camden county technical school. I am a senior of the 2012 class. I am a smart student who doesn't use all of my intelligence as much as I could. I am a student who always wants to be the best in every class I am in. I am competitive and losing is a option that I am not happy with but a option that I have to accept. I am learning that I can not always win and that losing is helpful. I am a guy who does not have it all figured out. I am a guy who has set goals high enough that it will take a life time to achieve all of them. I am a honest person to those I feel deserve the truth. I am addict to good music. I am a believer that inspiration can come from anywhere. I am someone who likes to impress people with material things. I am someone who lives wealthy even though I'm poor. I am a guy attracted to multiple types of females. I am not a drug addict. I strive to be different from everyone else. I am unsure about what I will do after I graduate. I am sure that I want to join the military. I am positive that my life has a bigger meaning then most think. I am tired of being unemployed. I am never going to let myself become unsuccessful in my career or marriage or parenthood. I am going to be a role model for the next generation. I am Dakota Beck.

jocelynn - SOPA

Sopa or the stop online piracy act is very much so like the novel 1984. Sopa is trying to go on everybody’s internet and control and watch everything you do! They won’t let you watch certain things or even say certain things with out them sticking their nose in. This is very similar to 1984 because big brother watches everybody in the town. He even watches them when they aren’t on the computer. He watches them at work, at home, even when you sleep. The screen can never be turned off. However, I feel as though SOPA will get to the point eventually because the computer is the first step. Everybody spends a lot of time on computers now a days. At least in this life we can turn off the computer screen. The poor people in 1984 could not escape big brother. Every where they turned “big brother was watching you.” I feel like if you say the wrong thing SOPA will try to get you in trouble and stick their nose where it doesn’t belong. Mr. Smith says SOPA is trying to take over our life! I agree with this one hundred percent. If we know they are watching us, we will have to censor our selves and the things we do on the computer. We shouldn’t have to! In 1948 the people were basically brainwashed, I hope that doesn’t happen to us any time in the future. If SOPA does take over I will go crazy.. even though I’m already half way there.

WHO AM I????

I am Kiaerra Banks. I am consider myself extremely fortunate to be here in the United States.I am a 90’s baby. I am a singer. I am smart. I am competion. I am round. I am powerful. I am daring. I am a loud person.i am indenpedent. I am responsible. I am a fighter. I am a motivator.i am african american. I am a very outgoing person. I am a respectful person when I have respect given to me. I am a person wo doesn’t like to argue. I am a person. I am who I am. I am honest. I am ready to get out of tis school. I am tired of waking up at 5 o’clock. I am going to new york next Tuesday to meet Tommy Hilfilger. I am tired. I am a weirdo. I am a hard worker.

I am Jocee Fierce lOl

I am Jocelynn Black. I am a round character in a book called life. I am very dynamic. I am a taurus. I am going to turn 18 on april 28th. I am very excited! I am also excited that my birthday is the day after prom. I am going to look very nice on prom night. I am going to wildwood after prom with my friends. I am going to have so much fun and get on all the rides. I am going to also get something pierced on my face. I am either going to get my nose or my lip. I am going to be so broke when I get back. I am going to spend so much money while im there. I am going to make sure it is a day I will never forget in my whole life. I am also excited about graduating on June 8th. I am counting down the days that I get out of this dump. I am so sick of this school and everyone in it. I am already making plans for when I gradute. I am going to college and becoming a pharmacist when I graduate. I am determined to make it big in life. I am also determind to make a lot of money. I am going to do a profession that is recession proof, and will still make a lot of money when everybody is not. I am very different from other females. I am now finished with this post.

I AM (TALASIA)

I am talasia. I am determined to reach my goals. I am a God fearing lady. I am emotional at times. I am angry inside. I am smart but havent yet mastered channeling my emotions the right way. I am one who has expensive taste. I am a person who loves to shop. I am very materialistic at times. I am hungry 93.2% of the time. I am one who love to go out to eat. I am that girl that you will most of the time see in heels. I am very opinionated. I am a very loving person. I am quick to act out how I feel. I am a person who loves their friends. I am the girl whos birthday is march 25. I am looking for to starting my life. I am in love with God. I am so thankful for all he’s done for me. I am about to punch jocee in her face lol. I am about to get my car very soon. I am going to try to stop thinking about food until lunch. I am going to order my clothes, jewlery, shoes, etc on line. I am getting emotionally sad about my senior year quickly coming to a end. I am getting irritated by a lot of teacher. I am also getting irritated by the students at my school. I am excited when I think about shopping. I am praying on a couple of things that I plan to see come to pass . I am a child of the KING. I am the best me in the world. I am now done with this post.

whats my character? I am.......

I am........studious, intellegent, beautiful, funny. I am ready to graduate. I am outspoken and determined. I am black, white, italian, german, hispanic and cherokee indian. I am a size 2 and a half in sneakers. I am a 9-10 in jeans. I am a small in shirts. I am a young woman with greenish grey eyes that change all the time. I am creative. I am someone who tries new things before looking down on it. I am not a young woman who, if the cover doesnt cath her eyes then she wont even read it. I am not perfect but i try. I am a young woman who if she doesnt like what she sees she will tell you and let you know exactly how she feels. I am a young woman who has fall en for a young man and would do anything for him. I am a young woman who if her friends are need of her help that she will always be there. i am a young woman who will smile to make you think i am happy. I am a young woman who will laugh instead of letting you see me cry. I am a young woman where i asked for strength and god gave me diffuculties to make me strong.

I am

I am bored and annoyed and angry and tired and hungry and young and short and a student and strong and neat and clever and crafty not ignorant and truthful and respectful and helpful and cheerful and grumpy and shy and thinking and sitting and sleeping and feeling and hearing and seeing and smelling and dinning and coughing and sneezing and breathing and living and singing and humming and noisy and yelling and clapping and snoring and whistling and shouting and howling and twittering and whining and red and blue and white and yellow and green and tired of writing this. I am also wanting to go home right now . I am in New Jersey. I am in class. I am on a computer. I am writing a blog post the that hints to what we will probably do next week. I am not looing forward to next week. I am going to lunch next period. I am almost done hopefully. I am not going to college. I am a good person. I am thinking that Mr. Smith is doing too much with this weird post and Mr. Smith just almost fell. I am about to laugh. I am listening to music. I am DONE!!!!

I am

I am Frankie , I am a person that is respectful. I am a baseball player. I am the kid that is chill.I am lazy. I am tired. I am a US citizen.I am hispanic.I am bored.I am a good person.I am alone. I am old.I am who i am. i am a hrd worker.i am honestI am Frankie , I am a person that is respectful. I am a baseball player. I am the kid that is chill.I am lazy. I am tired. I am a US citizen.I am hispanic.I am bored.I am a good person.I am alone. I am old.I am who i am. i am a hrd worker.i am honest

" I am "

I am a person who has been in the same relationship for three years. I am a loving person. I am a caing person. I am a person who can exprees my emotions. I am a loyalty person. I am a daughter. I am a little and big sister. I am an aunt to my nieces and nephews. I am a cousin. I am a furture teacher. I am a very smart young lady. I am a person who is not a very good test taker.I am a person you looks forward to going to prom this year. I am a stundent at CCTS. I am a senior this year my last year in this school. I am a furture hair styles on the side. I am a person that love doing sports. I am a person who loves doing the Breast Cancer walk every time it comes up. I am a person who knows what i want out of life. I am a person who loves proving others wrong about me when they say you can not do this you cant do that. I am a person who is a very hard worker. I am a person who works hard for what I want. I am a eightteen year old. I am a person who does not live home with my parnets. I am a person who loves the summer time. I am a person whos birthday is in the summer. I am a person who hates the winter.I am a person who loves to watch the snow fall but will never go outside and play in the snow.

All About Me

I am James Ernst and i am a senior in the engineering course in CCTS. I am an interesting person and will not live with being disrespected. I am also younge, and ajial, and free thinking, and smart, and happy, and funny, and strong, and alsome, and loving, and caring. I am a person who will do anything for his family, and take total resposability for my actions. I am a person that does not like having to rely on sombody else, and would rather not work in groups. I am a drug free indivisual and plan to kee it that way. I am a proud member of the pinikle parkour academy right off cross keys road. I am retty understand, and would rather you come to me if you have a problem with me rather than talk behind my back. I am a person who always overthinks things witch makes it hard for me to lie even if i feel lieing would be the best solution. I am an employee at Lake pine colony club, wawa coorperation, and bottom dollar stores in this area. I am also an employee at w&a cycles. This is the motor cycle shop i leave on co-op for. I am also vary close with my dad considering my mother has not been in my life sience I was about 3. I am a proud owner of a pure breed germin sheapard. I am proud to help those in need and would like to become a mechanicle engineer in the near future. Thank you for reading who I AM.

i am / green eggs an ham

i am barry. i am barry that likes food. i am bored with school. i am already getting tired of this. i am to tall to be traced on a paper. i am leaving school in 30 mins. i am someone that likes to work. i am someone that likes to drink. i am ready to graduate. i am ready to go to underwater welding school. im going to mcdonalds after this class. im gettin some chesse steaks oe of these days. i am going to new york for a dub step concort next friday. i am typing all of this with out looking at the text. i am sam sam i am. i am sam i dont like green eggs an ham. i am sam sam i am i will not get green eggs an ham.Friend: That Sam-I-am! That Sam-I-am! I do not like that Sam-I-am!
Sam-I-am: Do you like green eggs and ham?
Friend: I do not like them, Sam-I-am. I do not like green eggs and ham.
Sam-I-am: Would you like them here or there?
Friend: I would not like them here or there. I would not like them anywhere. I do
not like green eggs and ham. I do not like them Sam-I-am.
Sam-I-am: Would you like them in a house? Would you like them with a mouse?
Friend: I do not like them in a house. I do not like them with a mouse. I do not like
them here or there. I do not like them anywhere. I do not like green eggs and ham. I
do not like them, Sam-I-am.
Sam-I-am: Would you eat them in a box? Would you eat them with a fox?
Friend: Not in a box. Not with a fox. Not in a house. Not with a mouse. I would not
eat them here or there. I would not eat them anywhere. I would not eat green eggs
and ham. I do not like them, Sam-I-am.
Sam-I-am: Would you? Could you? In a car? Eat them! Eat them! Here they are.
Friend: I would not, could not, in a car.
Sam-I-am: You may like them. You will see. You may like them in a tree!
Friend: I would not, could not in a tree. Not in a car! You let me be. I do not like
them in a box. I do not like them with a fox. I do not like them in a house. I do not
like them with a mouse. I do not like them here or there. I do not like them
anywhere. I do not like green eggs and ham. I do not like them, Sam-I-am.

Who am i ???????????????????

I am Michael Jones . I am a high flyer. I am art. I am 90’s. I am history. I am god. I am you. I am spacely. I am a flight risker. I am young,wild, and free. I am the son of devine. I am earth. I am brave. I am wise. I am commonsense. I am hii power. I am the recarnation of will smith. I am the recarnation of kid n play. I am Martin Luther King. I am faith . I am hope. I am change. I am success. I am attention. I am imagine. I am greatness. I am design. I am commitment. I am feelings. I am make believe. I am a god child. I am a angel. I am love. I am admire. I am Big hearted. I am action. I am Amazing. I am outstanding. I am Blessed. I am bright. I am inventions. I am endorse. I am famous. I am Grace. I am money . I am express. I am happy. I am Motivation. I am inspiration. I am Rich. I am Safe. I am Quiet. I am Thrilled. I am Trustful. I am Wonderful. I am with everyone . I am the person you can run to. I am Strong. I am dedicaed to my city how macolm is dedicated to his country. I am Unusal. I am style. I am Soul. I am pride. I am shine. I am Revoulotionize. I am Relay. I am speed. I am power.

i am

I am john valentine. I am fun. I am god. I am awesome. I am a man that is amazing at soccer and is the best soccer player at ccts. I am the man that can party all night and day. I am the hick out of all of my friends. I am the guy that loves lifted trucks. I am the guy who loves to wheel and off road. I am the man with a Toyota Tacoma aka yota. I am the man who loves to ride dirt bikes and quads. I am the man that loves to hunt. I am the guy how loves to fish. I am the guy that loves to play sports. I am reckless and don’t care what people think about me. I am the guy who tells you how it is and not care what u have to say. I am a man who works at Honda and hates my job with a deep deep passion. I am the guy who can’t wait to graduate high school. I am the son who can’t wait to move out of the hose to live on my own. I am the man who has a deep love for the game of soccer. I am the one who watches soccer every day. I am the one who plays soccer every chance I get. I am the one that is always trying to have fun with every thing I do. I am the one that loves to camp every weekend.

I AM...

I am a Camden County Technical Schools student. I am 18. I am a female. I am a friendly person. I am a good student. I am a big sister. I am an Allied Health Student. I am a future college student. I am a future Psychology major. I am a nice person. I am a student who works. I am a CNA. I am Dominican. I am a loving daughter. I am a hard worker. I am a caring person. I am a senior. I am a person who likes to watch TV. I am a Smartphone user. I am a computer user. I am a loving person. I am a person who feels sleepy right now. I am a person who likes to meet new friends. I am a person who likes to get good grades. I am a person who likes to do a great job at what I do. I am a person who can be trusted by others. I am a person who loves my friends and family very much. I am a person who looks for honest friends. I am a person who enjoys music. I am a person who talks a lot. I am a person who does not enjoy getting up in the early mornings. I am a person who enjoys their bed. I am a person who likes to shop. I am a person who likes to laugh. I am a person who likes to watch movies. I am person who writes blogs in English class. 

I am....

I am very intellegent. Not only am I intellegent bu I am also out going. Not only am I out going but I am also atheletic. I am a future cosmetologist. I am serious minded and determined to be not only succesful school wise but also successfull career wise too. I am a pianoist player. I take piano lessons every friday during school, second period. I am a artist. I take art class eighth period. I enjoy being in this class because I am able to express how I feel and show who I am through my art work whether it be from paintings or drawings or crochying, etc. I am a artist fashion wise. I say this because I have a certain look when it comes to fashion. In my opinion make up, cloes, accessories, shoes, and my hair styles describe my charcteristics from the outside looking in. For example, when I am having a beauty because I woke up and just felt so good, wonderful, and blessed that is when I dress up. In the winter time I might where a nice dress with tights nice peter pan boots, earrings and bracelets and a necklace that matches what I am wearing. When it comes down to my hair I might have curly hair since it's winter and the weather is more wet and misty out there. In the fall time I would proably where a long sleeve shirt and a vest to go with it, I would wear nice jeans, earrings, necklace, and bracelets to match. I don't really hav to go into detail of the way I dress but overall I am open minded, try not to be judgemental, and deending on certain situations I could have a bad temper.

" I am "

I am a very kind and loving person that is untill you press my bottons than I can be a bit mean. I am always smiling and laughing, Im a happy person. I am friendly with everyone, and easy to get along with. I am a money person, I love money and Im spoiled so I always get what I want no matter what. I am also a shy person, well just a little until I get to know you. I am always on my phone its my life, youll never see me without it at ay time, if I do happen to leave it home its an accident and best believe the whole time Im just thinking of getting home right away to have it back in my hands. I am a photogenic person, I love taking pictures of my self of course thats another reason why I need to have my phone with me. I am not afriad to express how I feel to know one, except when Im really mad because sometimes I tend to say things I dont mean so I like to cool down a bit and than I wont have no problem. I am ready to graduate already because Im tired of waking up at five in the mornning and coming to school, and also because I want to be able to work full time. I am ready to become someone sucessfull in life and be on my own little by little. I am independent but dont get me wrong I do like to be pampered from time to time.

free write

Good bye this is one word i hate to say. Just recently i had to break it off with someone i truely love and cared about it really wasnt easy but it was for the best i think. they say " to do whats best we have to do what we don't want. '' and i didn't want to do it. i hope we get back together sooner than i think because rite now it's really hurting me. but we both agree that we needed space because now it doesn't like how it was before. imma try to keep in contact with her because i still care about her even tho we are not together. I won't forget the first time i met her it was the summer night of September 9th 2011 she was so pretty and funny and also had a beautiful smile. When i was looking at her she kept on sayin "why you looking at me?". In ma head i was saying because i never saw a beautiful girl like you before but instead my mouth said " nothing". But later i realize she was looking at me the same way i would look at her. So i told her ma name and everything and she told me her name and everything about her. the next day we started going out and we had our ups and downs but we always tryed to work it out. six month we been together and on March 14rd 2012 we were done. but she will always be in ma heart. some day soon i hope we can get back together.

Wednesday, March 14, 2012

climax

I think the climax of the novel sold would have to be when the american under cover cop came by and ask the young girl who name is Lakshmi who was sold into the happiness home by her step father who was a lazy gambler. I think this part of the story was the climax because no one ever try to offer help to Lakshmi leave the happiness house before. Even tho there was a street boy who was nice to her offer her food and drinks he never try to help her leave the house but in my opinion if he would of stay a little longer he would of try to help her escape. the under cover cop ask lakshmi some questions like" how is it here and do you want to leave? " lakshmi did not trust him at first but before the cop left him gave her a card with his number on it he told her if you ever want to leave just call this number and it took her 3 days to get help but once she got a chance she got someone to call the number for her and the american cop came with other police men and arrested mumtaz who was the owner of the happniess house which Lakshmi was trap at and save lakshmi.